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Sean Pendr

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Final Ritual Chapter 1-3

    very good, very good, you have been working very hard i see and all you need to really do link together the paragraphs and events a little better. just work ...

    Mar 20, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Story of Skye Phantom - Chapter 1

    Hiya Black Dove, this was good, yep a little on the light side for detail but remember the quote "simplicity in detail" so make it a little more detailed and ...

    Mar 19, 2007


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